Serenity Prayer Revised

The well known Serenity Prayer goes:

God, grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change,
Courage to change the things I can,
And wisdom to know the difference.

My brother told me how he revised it to fit the way he sees things.  It went something like this:

God, grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, and change the things I cannot accept.

I like my brother's revised prayer better.  It sounds more hopeful and enthusiastic.